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　　06-13  觀點(diǎn)類 - 環(huán)保話題

　　Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　題目大意：

　　個(gè)人無力改善環(huán)境。只有政府和大公司可以做到。同意或反對？

　　思路：

　　任務(wù)回應(yīng)：

　　題目觀點(diǎn)由2部分組成，需全部回應(yīng)：1）個(gè)人無力改善環(huán)境；2）環(huán)保只能靠政府和企業(yè)。

　　論證邏輯：

　　文章中遇到帶有武斷含義的詞要留意，Only是強(qiáng)調(diào)排他性的武斷表達(dá)，如果選擇同意，很難證明（即很難從邏輯推導(dǎo)出政府和企業(yè)和環(huán)保之間的唯一性，也很難用2個(gè)以上的成功案例來證明這是一個(gè)普遍的事實(shí)），所以這道題目建議選擇完全反對。即主體段-1：寫個(gè)人完全可以有所作為來改善環(huán)境；主體段-2：反駁“只有政府企業(yè)能改善環(huán)境”這個(gè)武斷的概念（即光靠他們這種理論說不通）。

　　提綱梳理如下：

　　范文

　　Some people assert that there is no justification for individuals in tackling environmental problems,whereas it is the business exclusive to authorities and companies. I completely disagree with this opinion as I do not see any fields that can be isolated from the general public.

　　From an individual perspective, there are many things they can do to reduce their contribute to environmental pollution. One option is that residents can reduce the emissions of the carbon dioxide by driving less and traveling more by public transport.The effect has been approved in many metropolitan cities like Shanghai, where convenient and affordable public transport services have played an importantrole in the reduction of exhaust fumes from vehicles. Another practical action that can be taken by individuals is to classify rubbish, which can make a huge difference in recycling waste.

　　In addition, it looks absurd to me that environmental issues are reckoned to be only addressed by politicians and business moguls. While some might argue that it is the administration that has the power to legislate against pollution, we should not forget that many bills are initiated under the influence of the public opinion. One convincing example is the decision of Brexit based on the referendum of British citizens. Also,industrial pollution should not be the only culprit to blame. One striking fact we cannot afford to ignore is the enormous amount of daily rubbish from households, such as the plastic bags and packages. How can we focus only on enterprises while turning a blind eye on household waste?

　　In conclusion, I do not think the problem of pollution could be addressed by authorities and large companies without the involvement of individuals.

　　相關(guān)詞匯：

　　Exclusive  僅限于

　　Authority  政府

　　Isolate  隔絕

　　carbon dioxide 二氧化碳

　　metropolitan  大都市

　　affordable  負(fù)擔(dān)得起的

　　exhaust fumes  排放

　　moguls  巨頭

　　the administration 政府

　　legislate  立法

　　initiate  發(fā)起

　　referendum  公投

　　culprit  罪魁禍?zhǔn)?/p>

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