2015年6月6日雅思寫作解析及語料庫

　　Some people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for people who need it, however, others prefer to give money to the nations or international charities, discuss both sides and give your opinion 有人認為給需要救助的人自己的幫助更加可取，有人認為給有需求的國家或國際援助組織提供經(jīng)濟援助更加重要，討論兩種觀點，給出你的意見。

　　雅思題庫：

　　Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人認為經(jīng)濟援助之重要的，有人認為實際的幫助和建議重要，你的觀點是什么?

　　雅思解析題目：

　　2015年6月6日雅思考題中向有需要的國家提供幫助指的是一些國家在遭遇自然災(zāi)害，經(jīng)濟危機的時候，應(yīng)該給他們提供直接的援助，例如醫(yī)療隊，救援組織或者志愿者。對立方觀點經(jīng)濟援助指的是直接的捐助。本題為舊題重新，考察的是國家援助的方式。

　　作家立場：發(fā)達國家應(yīng)該承擔對于發(fā)展中國家援助的責任。對比經(jīng)濟援助，直接的幫助更加可取可行。

　　雅思原創(chuàng)范文賞析：

　　首段;背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

　　It is not rare to see that some well-to-do countries like to give financial aid or other forms of assistance to poor ones. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not economic donation is the best effective means of assistance. Speaking for myself, those developed countries should assume the responsibility of helping those countries, which are still suffering from the agonies of popular disease, poor education and undeveloped trade. However, financial aids have both its merits and demerits， other suitable ways of assistance should be considered.

　　解析：It is not rare to see that …… 這一點很常見

　　解析：Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not 關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該……，人們持有不同意見

　　解析：Financial aids have both its merits and demerits 經(jīng)濟援助有利有弊

　　二段：反方觀點的展開：

　　Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that those well-off countries ought to give a financial aid to the poverty-stricken nations’ charities. For a start, it is out of the reason of humanism and could benefit the straitened nations directly. More precisely, financial beneficence from the developed countries could help to accelerate the construction of infrastructure and establishing more houses. Also, when some rich countries donate large sums of money to those needy countries, more job opportunities could be created and thus living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced.

　　解析：Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that 的確，為證明……是合理的，我們是可以找到一些理由的

　　解析：……could benefit the straitened nations directly v可以使貧困國家直接受益

　　解析：Living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced 貧困國家的生活水平可以被提高

　　三段：正方觀點的展開：

　　Nonetheless, we should be alert to the possible risks of economic assistance. For one thing, it might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. For another, international aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. Apart from financial aids, there are still many other options available to assist the undeveloped nations. One way is by opening up trade barriers, which enables the poor countries to sell their goods. Another way is to forgive economic debts so that the self-supporting ability of the poor nations could be promoted. Eventually, the teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries to take the responsibilities of educational and medical assistances.

　　解析：It might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. 經(jīng)濟援助也許會使貧困國家對于援助國更加依賴

　　解析：International aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. 國際援助也許會帶來政治干預(yù)和經(jīng)濟掠奪

　　解析：open up trade barriers v開發(fā)貿(mào)易壁壘

　　解析：forgive economic debts v免除經(jīng)濟債務(wù)

　　解析：The teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries 可以向貧困國家派駐教師和醫(yī)生。

尾段：再次亮明觀點：

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that economic assistance has both pros and cons during the process of international assistance, other forms of helps could be advocated such as eliminating trade barriers, freeing economic debts and appointing medical or educational teams.

　　解析：other forms of helps could be advocated 應(yīng)該提倡其他形式的援助

　　雅思原創(chuàng)寫作語料庫：

　　1. needy = poverty-stricken = impoverished adj 貧困的

　　2. well-to-do nations = affluent countries = better-off nations n富裕的國家

　　3. under-developed countries and areas n不發(fā)達的國家和地區(qū)

　　4. donors = donor countries n援助國

　　5. beneficence = donations n援助物資

　　6. international aid and assistance 國際援助

　　7. is out of the reason of humanism v出于人道主義

　　8. accelerate the construction of infra-structure v加速基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施建設(shè)

　　9. be alert to the possible risks of v對于……的可能的風險保持警惕

　　10. political interference and economic exploitation n政治干預(yù)和經(jīng)濟掠奪

　　11. more likely to generate the poor countries’ economic reliance v容易造成經(jīng)濟依賴

　　12. free the economic debt v免除經(jīng)濟債務(wù)

　　13. eliminate the trade barrier and open up the trade barrier v消除貿(mào)易壁壘和免費經(jīng)濟債務(wù)

　　14. be dispatched = be assigned v被分派去做……

　　15. consider actual requirements v考慮到實際需求

　　雅思全文點評：

　　本文的寫作特別考察一個人思想的深度以及對于國家援助話題的語料庫的積累。童鞋如果在考前可以練習到本文或者學習相關(guān)語料庫，本次寫作比較容易博取高分。本文依然是一篇符合雅思寫作標準的高分佳作，建議童鞋積累文中精彩的詞匯句法。