歡迎來到環(huán)球教育官方網(wǎng)站,來環(huán)球,去全球!

您所在的位置: 首頁 > 雅思考試 > 雅思備考
雅思備考

5月4日雅思寫作思路解析(附7分范文)

2019-05-10

來源:環(huán)球教育

小編:長安 1661
摘要:

  5月第一場雅思考試結(jié)束了,不知道大家考得如何?跟隨上海環(huán)球教育余曰簡老師來看看這次的寫作題目、范文和解析吧!

  05-04  觀點(diǎn)類題型 – 社會話題

  The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work an hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  題目大意:

  新技術(shù)在企業(yè)的普及,讓青年比老年人更有求職優(yōu)勢。同意還是反對

  思路:

  To what extent do you agree or disagree,建議采用折中的部分同意/反對的立場;在文章中采用雙邊論證。

  將get work這一抽象的概念予以細(xì)分后,根據(jù)不同工作有不同的側(cè)重,討論年輕和年老的求職者各自的優(yōu)勢。如某些工作注重新技術(shù)的應(yīng)用,年輕人求職有優(yōu)勢;而另一些工作,則不是由依賴技術(shù)優(yōu)勢,更依賴年長者的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和人脈等。

  審題,找出關(guān)鍵詞:

  made it easier for young people to get work:get work是一個抽象概念(在具體論證中,需要分成不同的具體工種,并分析各自的需求,才可以討論是青年還是老人更有競爭優(yōu)勢)

  提綱梳理如下:


  范文:

  Some people claim that the computerized era makes the younger generation more competitive than their senior counterparts in job seeking. While it maybe the truth in the case of some businesses, I would say that there are many other fields where old people have their unique strength over young rivals.

  On the one hand, in some technological industries, young job seekers who can manipulate computers or software do have more opportunities than old people.This is particularly obvious in positions like programming and IT engineering,where the proficiency in computer know-how and potential learning capabilityare the key consideration for employers. That is why there are usually thresholds set for the age of applicants in these occupations, given the general belief that young people are more adapted to the ever-changing trend of new technology.

  On the other hand,there are other jobs which do not require proficiency in technological skills. The sales, for example, is one of those positions that attaches more importance on experience and business connections, both of which are the advantages of senior employees, as it takes years to accumulate the knowledge and establish network in a certain field. The same is true for consulting companies, where the profound insight from an experienced expert is far more reliable and persuasive to clients.The last fact we cannot afford to ignore is that in almost all countries, whether these be developed or developing ones, it is the elderly who take the position of president, no matter how much the government values new technology.

  In conclusion, it is undeniable that old people are eclipsed by young talents in certain technological positions, but it seems to me that senior citizens still have their role to play in many sectors in this high-tech age.

  相關(guān)詞匯:

  Manipulate  熟練掌握

  Rival競爭者

  know-how  專業(yè)知識

  threshold  門檻

  proficiency  專業(yè)能力

  connections人脈

  insight  遠(yuǎn)見

  相關(guān)句型:

  Thesame is true for …

  Thelast fact we cannot afford to ignore is that …

  5月11日場口語高頻話題

  1. 空閑時間做的事

  Describe a time you enjoyed your free time.

  2. 你知道的實(shí)用技能

  Describea practical skill you know

  3.孩子們逗你笑的經(jīng)歷

  Describea time that children made you laugh

  4.歷史建筑

  Describea historical building

  5. 業(yè)余時間幫助他人

  Describea person who helps others in his or her spare time

  6.感興趣的歷史

  Describe a period of time in the history of yourcountry that you are interested in.

  7.別人幫助下做的決定

  Describe an important decision made with the help of other people.

  8.好的生活方式

  Describea lifestyle that you think is good

  近期寫作考題回顧

  2019年4月27日

  Task 1 柱狀圖

  Task 2

  Some people think certain old buildings are worth preserving more than the other ones. Which types of old buildings should be preserved?Do you think the advantages of preserving old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?

  2019年4月25日

  Task 1 折線題

  Task 2

  Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

  2019年4月13日

  Task 1 折線題

  Task 2

  Some people believe thatfamous people's support towards international aid organizations draws theattention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems lessimportant. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  2019年4月6日

  Task 1 柱狀圖

  Task 2

  Some people believe that the best way to reduce the time to travel to work is replace gardens and parks with apartment buildings, which commuters can live. Others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  2019年3月23日

  Task 1 流程圖

  Task 2

  Once children start school, teachers have more influenceon their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent doyou agree or disagree?

  2019年3月14日

  Task 1  柱狀圖

  Task 2

  Newspapers have an enormous influence on people's ideas and views. Why? Positive or negative?

  2019年3月9日

  Task 1 柱狀圖

  Task 2

  As part of education,students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

  2019年3月2日

  Task 1  柱狀圖

  Task 2

  Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?


有規(guī)劃 更自信

1V1免費(fèi)課程規(guī)劃指導(dǎo)

雅思考試

換一換 換一換

托??荚?/h4>
換一換 換一換