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寫作總是無話可說or“廢話”滿篇?如何解決看這篇!

2021-01-29 16:05

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小編:環(huán)小影 471
摘要:在多年授課的過程中,我們經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn),很多學生可能平時在家里寫作的時候都感覺自己的狀態(tài)不錯,為什么考試的時候卻會“掉鏈子”?每當歸納原因的時候,就會發(fā)現(xiàn),最重要的原因就是在考試的時候想不出來很好的點。話說到一半就沒話說了,或者是隨便舉例子論述。

  寫作總是無話可說or“廢話”滿篇?如何解決看這篇!在多年授課的過程中,我們經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn),很多學生可能平時在家里寫作的時候都感覺自己的狀態(tài)不錯,為什么考試的時候卻會“掉鏈子”?

  每當歸納原因的時候,就會發(fā)現(xiàn),最重要的原因就是在考試的時候想不出來很好的點。話說到一半就沒話說了,或者是隨便舉例子論述。

  今天,Shane老師將會跟大家分享如何思考才能“下筆如有神”,閑話少敘,我們直接上干貨!

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Students are more interested in politics today than in the past.

  很多同學在拿到一套題的時候,總想說一句話“怎么還有這樣的題???”

  如果還在想這個,那就太不專業(yè)了,在思考問題的時候可能就要花上三四分鐘,到最后越想越糟糕,越寫越難受。這就是很多小伙伴們最頭疼的環(huán)節(jié)-寫作前應(yīng)該如何構(gòu)思。

  Shane老師在這里給大家介紹一個“兩邊思考”的方法——一個正觀點,一個反觀點(最省時間,每個都說一個觀點,一個當主體,一個當讓步)

  首先,我們要果斷選擇。我們在思考的時候,當發(fā)現(xiàn)自己沒有任何一方自己特別想選,或者特別遲疑時,就直接選擇第一個觀點當做自己的主觀點。

  在這道題里就是“Students are more interested in politics today than in the past.” 然后再去想原因就會發(fā)現(xiàn)會順暢很多。

  當選擇了一個立場,但是還想不出來接下來該寫什么時,我們就要反復(fù)重復(fù)。

  重復(fù)什么?就是在腦海里重復(fù)“現(xiàn)在的學生要比之前更加關(guān)注政治了,因為...” 每次給自己一個背景去思考,總比在大腦里空白的去想“到底有什么?”要強上許多,反復(fù)重復(fù),一直到自己想到為止。

  終于,我們想好了一個topic sentence?!皌he policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community”

  之后我們要做的事情是想另一個觀點的一個topic sentence,也就是學生不感興趣政治,因為“學生們忙于學習,無暇關(guān)注政治的信息”

  這樣我們這篇文章的龍骨就出來了——

  中心觀點(thesis statement)

  I think students are becoming more and more interested in politics now as the world is changing so rapidly.

  第一個body 段:

  To begin with, the policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community.

  讓步段:

  There is no denying that it is difficult for students, under the pressure of busy studies, to be distracted by political messages.

  我們在寫topic sentence 的時候,必須要注意它和自己的中心論點有沒有直接的因果關(guān)系。寫完的句子必須double check?。?!

  我們來試一試?!皩W生們現(xiàn)在更加感興趣于政治了,因為現(xiàn)在的政治對留學生的影響非常大”如果這個邏輯算得上通順,那這個topic sentence就過關(guān)了。

  為什么我會推薦“兩邊觀點”這個方法?

  正是因為這樣可以快速構(gòu)建出兩個觀點。按照這個方法進行大量練習,練熟了之后,可以再加一個主體段觀點,總體文章可以構(gòu)成“兩正一反”的類型,結(jié)構(gòu)會清晰許多。

  紙上談兵不如動手實踐!大家可以嘗試用這個龍骨練習一下這一篇文章,看看寫作過程會不會流暢許多呢?

  以下是Shane老師寫的例文,大家可以參考閱讀~


  Scientific discoveries should be shared by all countries worldwide, and no government should keep them secret.The development of science and technology has always been one of the key elements of world development. Scientists often make new discoveries in their daily research, and whether these new discoveries should be shared with the world is a hotly debated topic. In my opinion, I believe that scientific discoveries should be shared around the world.

  First of all, sharing research results allows more scientists around the world to carry out further research. Many of the world's scientific discoveries are presented to the public for the first time in the form of papers. Because these technologies are only discovered by a scientist or a team, many of their drawbacks and potential dangers have not been thoroughly studied, which contains some areas that need to be improved. If a scientific achievement is shared in a timely manner, many scientists around the world can carry out more in-depth research on this topic, so that the scientific achievement can better serve everyone. There is no denying that sharing all research results can lead to some problems, such as some scientific findings with very significant safety implications. The dangers of finding and sharing a chemical or nuclear material that could be used to make a weapon are enormous, and could pose a threat to the entire world if it were acquired by malicious individuals. However, the scientific community, as well as governments around the world, are very cautious about the development of dangerous projects. Potentially destructive technologies have long been the core secrets of many countries. Furthermore, no matter the research result is a academic paper or in any other different forms, it can only be read by people with considerable academic level. Scientists in the world are generally more righteous, and what they are doing is always in a better way to create more welfare, so this issue does not need to worry too much. In general, sharing the scientific discoveries around the world would be very beneficial, because sharing can lead to further improvement of related technologies. Beyond that, the dangers and pitfalls of sharing technology are minimal.




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