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小編:環(huán)球教育整理 387托福寫作中有一些易犯錯誤,將它列舉出來,考生可以對照自己的寫作看一看,有則改之無則加勉,不要為不必要的失誤丟分。
1.托福寫作段落過長,不分段。一大段一大段的內(nèi)容看起來冗長沒有邏輯性,讓人失去讀下去的興趣。適當分段,讓文章整體看上去簡潔明了。
2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)不平行,使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來的時候,應(yīng)當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。
3.不知所云,不知道想要表達些什么:Many companies began using computers mouth.
4.句子別扭,措辭過長或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用縮寫形式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),而應(yīng)當使用單詞的完整形式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
6.主語與動詞一致問題,主語和動詞在單復(fù)數(shù)方面要一致。
7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets into college. For example, my friend in high school.句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞,因為其實它應(yīng)是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤,修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。
8.介詞多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown,home,there,here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞,因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
9.跑題或不相關(guān)There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個意思與okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達的意思很普通大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了,因而就沒有必要再說出來。
10.標點問題I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.這是一個非常普遍的問題!許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號,尤其是當他們用手寫的時候。
11.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù),或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨使用,應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
12.拼寫錯誤主語、動詞或賓語有問題I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題 缺少主語、動詞或賓語,或者這些成分重復(fù)。
13.代詞指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
除此之外可能還有一些問題就不一一列舉,希望考生在平時練習(xí)中就多注意,不要煩一些低級錯誤。