(2)&(3)

　　這下解決了大腦中內(nèi)容構(gòu)思的問(wèn)題，回到剛講對(duì)號(hào)入座的第二點(diǎn)和第三點(diǎn)都是講模板的，這兩點(diǎn)一起講吧。

　　請(qǐng)問(wèn)，模板要背嗎?為了回答這個(gè)問(wèn)題，我們?nèi)フ乙粋€(gè)模板來(lái)看看先，獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)題目的模板基本長(zhǎng)相就是這個(gè)樣子。

　　如果你連personally，reason，這些詞都造不成沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤的句子，那么模板還是有用的，至少?gòu)谋膯卧~狀態(tài)到了有話講的狀態(tài)了。但是樓主都過(guò)了CET6了，這個(gè)模板就發(fā)揮不出效用了。畢竟，模板的劃線填空區(qū)域和寫(xiě)了字給背誦的區(qū)域，非常多考生是把握不好銜接和流暢性一致的。那么怎么辦辦捏?說(shuō)實(shí)話，先問(wèn)問(wèn)自己，為什么要模板?我還真問(wèn)過(guò)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，很多學(xué)生回答：因?yàn)槟０鍖?xiě)得好。那么，又請(qǐng)問(wèn)，“好”的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是什么?學(xué)生回答：模板是一個(gè)完整的事兒呀，講得清清楚楚的。OK，原來(lái)這就是大多數(shù)考生擁抱模板的理由。但是，你知不知道其實(shí)OG里面考官寫(xiě)得很清楚了評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)呀!下圖是最高分?jǐn)?shù)段位的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

　　如果仔細(xì)去看，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，即使題目問(wèn)的是“Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important” 考官的真正的目的也不是挖掘你真常去的什么破地兒，他又不是狗仔隊(duì)，才不關(guān)心你的隱私，他甚至也不關(guān)心你回答得是不是一個(gè)完整的故事。他只關(guān)心：你是不是關(guān)于這題說(shuō)人話了，你說(shuō)了什么話，用了哪些個(gè)詞兒，他能不能聽(tīng)懂。OG里面，就是上面截圖給大家的那個(gè)托福指南第三版，在第七章就是一套TPO2?？?問(wèn)的就是place這個(gè)題目，而且后面帶有配套光碟里面高分學(xué)生的回答，聽(tīng)上去是一個(gè)俄羅斯妹紙的錄音。(不知道知乎可不可以上傳錄音，如果可以記得教我，我下次傳上來(lái)。)解析的部分有rater’s comment，也就是評(píng)分官對(duì)考生為什么拿高分的理由分析。大家可以去聽(tīng)聽(tīng)那個(gè)妹紙回答得如何，內(nèi)容是這樣的：I would like to go, …h(huán)mm, I often go to France because I met a friend of mine..ah..two years ago, and she invited me already several times. They’ve been there already for several times. And I always have been fascinated by French history and started to read in French, ah, books, although in the Russian, but not in French, ah, since I was 12. Ah… and I’ve been already in the south so right now I’m going to the north of the country. And I would like to try their famous yogurt, cheese, wine, and just to see the/ 她最后幾句話沒(méi)來(lái)得及說(shuō)完，時(shí)間到了，錄音停止。這段錄音我會(huì)操作以后上傳，記得提醒我，如果著急的朋友也可以自己去網(wǎng)上找找OG Track30。當(dāng)然，語(yǔ)音語(yǔ)調(diào)也是一部分。關(guān)于語(yǔ)音語(yǔ)調(diào)另外找時(shí)間再講吧。one thing at a time.

　　下面是針對(duì)這個(gè)俄羅斯考生的回答，考官給出的評(píng)論：

　　Track 30

　　Rater’s comments

　　The speaker continues speaking throughout the entire 45 seconds. She speaks clearly using a variety of vocabulary and a wide range of grammar. Her reasons are well-developed. She uses specific details about why France is an important place for her. Instead of just saying “I’m interested in French culture because it is interesting,” she elaborates by talking about her friend, her interest in French history and culture from a young age, and the food. There is a logical progression of ideas that makes the response easy to understand.

　　看吧，考官關(guān)心的是是否流利說(shuō)了45秒，不要在意最后一秒有沒(méi)有說(shuō)完?？脊訇P(guān)心的是你用了哪些表達(dá)，說(shuō)白了就是拓展你的話題，不必局限于模板?？忌娴臎](méi)有必要和題目中“explain why it is important”這幾個(gè)字死磕，人家考官根本就不關(guān)心，俄國(guó)妹紙也沒(méi)赤果果說(shuō)important，倒是說(shuō)了一堆具象的東西，和你談法國(guó)的酸奶，奶酪，葡萄酒。聽(tīng)起來(lái)就是那么帶感。你也可以的。

　　所以，你的目標(biāo)就是：拓(che)展(dan)，而且要圍繞著題目扯淡。不會(huì)扯淡是嗎?我們來(lái)練習(xí)扯一個(gè)：

　　TPO1-Q1

　　Talk about a book you have read that was important to you for some reason. Explain why the book was important to you. Give specific details and examples to explain your answer.

　　話題是book，足矣。

　　有看過(guò)的書(shū)嗎?純中文的最好別說(shuō)了，更別說(shuō)天朝古代的，除非你真的特別在行，免得大腦轉(zhuǎn)譯速度跟不上，考官也聽(tīng)不懂，要是講三國(guó)演義那真的夠嗆，滿口somebody killed somebody，一股濃重的三國(guó)殺味兒，還講不清楚。拜托，人家只讓你講45秒，注意單位是秒，這一分鐘都不到的時(shí)間能講幾句話?一句話如果講7秒，那么45秒充其量能講六句半。別給自己添堵了，成嗎?挑個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的，就哈利波特吧，不會(huì)拼寫(xiě)?沒(méi)關(guān)系，口語(yǔ)考官才不管你會(huì)不會(huì)拼寫(xiě)呢，那是寫(xiě)作section的事兒。選哈利波特的原因很簡(jiǎn)單，就算沒(méi)看過(guò)書(shū)至少看過(guò)電影吧，如果電影也沒(méi)看過(guò)，至少聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)吧。好的，開(kāi)始說(shuō)話，第一句：